Flowing Against Time ...: wonder

Monday, 23 November 2009

wonder

Swirling sensation clinging with her
guarded mind, struggling harder

Dizziness gripping mind
stiffness prevailing in spine

she is wondering on his effect
how can he make her like this

by just touching her heart
~~not her bossom or flesh..~~

6 comments:

Shriti said...: hey makk..
thanx for dropping by..
glad you liked my blog :)
anyways nice post :)
byeee take care; Thursday, 26 November 2009 at 17:19:00 GMT+5:30
Insignia said...: Hey,

Wonderful!! I read the poem twice; each time reading the other line in the end...

Just captures the mood at different time. Beautiful. :-); Friday, 27 November 2009 at 16:36:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: @Chocolate lover

So nice to see you here.

Keep bugging me,

Never say bye.

C ya around; Friday, 27 November 2009 at 16:40:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: @Insgnia

I am delighted by your appreciation.

Hope to receive your critics some time.

Keep Smiling. Keep dropping by.; Friday, 27 November 2009 at 16:43:00 GMT+5:30
Sh@s said...: Beautiful and captivating.
Keep it up!!; Wednesday, 9 December 2009 at 19:31:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: @ Shas

Your words were awaited.

Keep Smiling.; Thursday, 10 December 2009 at 10:06:00 GMT+5:30

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