I walk alone along side her
to be there when it hard & rough
dont know if want to walk out
but it doesn't feel right & painless if I do
to be there when it hard & rough
din't know if I wanted some thing back from her
still don't know what evaporates my tears
but it doesn't feel right & painless if I do
insomnia had bitten me , be wrap in her fragerance
it felt so right to be in her essence
don't know if she knew all about the presence
never cared for that, even if it was matter of life of death...
20 comments:
Consuming..
Totally wrapped in the aura of her :)
And i guess it is life 'or' death in the last line which you have written as 'of'..
Oh oh! Do i see someone here? Whos that stupid girl?
:-) It is always a matter of Life and Death? Sometimes it is matter of This Life and That Life also!
#unknown wanderer
Well its written correctly. Nice to know that it could have been that way too, but here it is the way its written.
#Insignia
hahahaha... of course you feel her..:)..
in the thin air..
# aativas
You said it rightly that its not always matter of life or death, may be it can be this life or that.
but some times death more cheerful, romantic and full of life that it nice to njoy her..
:)
Keep Smiling..Keep landing here..
Thats why i said i guess..i din't say it is..
Dear Makk,
Good Morning!
Love is life;always life.
Showing the wonderful coours of life,
Bringing the most beautiful smile on face,
Making one feel the soft and tender feelings...
Good Verses and keep writing...
lET THE LOVE BLOOM!IT'S SPRING,YAAR.
Wishing you a lovely day ahead,
Sasneham,
Anu
#unknownwanderer
I am glad you said it.
:)
#Anupama
Welcome!!
Its lovely to see you here with quiet lovely thoughts.
Let the spring prevail....
Keep landing here.
Good one.
Hope you are fine. Who is she? :P
they never care, do they?
We are such fools to believe that they would.
Gosh, Makk...that was so much close to heart...and really hit me hard...Sounded as if...U should know better...
#Rajii
We are not fools.. we are we.
:)
#Jzt4me
welcome here.
I would love to see your own word, if those can be rolled down here... in a mail as you like them.
Its nice to see you here, hope to see you more often,
Keep Smiling.
beautiful poem
life
or death
colors of life
# SM
thank you.. :)
#Shas
I am gr88888888888 :)
who is she is a gr888 question as well/ :)
but reply is pathetic..because i dont have it :)
All dark to light
Lovely change!
# unknown wanderer
very lovely is your taste may be.
:)
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