Thursday 21 January 2010

Reverberance....

silence of scattering pieces echoed
as eyes glanced to stills of LORD

reverberance was so overwhelming
off guard was the human so caring

caught in fury of happenings
couldn't composed self in musical saplings

time has made a human, so inhuman
remorse, pain, tears all given way to passion

sprinkling smile or flamboyant style
always try to put together broken pieces of plight.



18 comments:

Pankhuri said...

well written :)

Makk said...

@ pankhuri

thank you. :-)

Keep stopping by!

Insignia said...

"reverberance was so overwhelming"...........AS A BELL :-)

Makk said...

@Shas

Keep it up.

Makk said...

@ Insignia

:-)

Bell for? ;-)

HaRy!! said...

Makk... pic and the writing was the best match!

Makk said...

HaRy

thank you sir. Keep landing here.

Anonymous said...

sprinkling smile or flamboyant style
always try to put together broken pieces of plight.

Titaxy said...

amazing!

i loved a couple of other posts i read here, too. :) gonna come back for more every time you write :)

Megha said...

Nicely written :) loved the 1st 2 lines

Makk said...

@ IHM

Let the light of IHM fall upon me dumbo...:)

these are my favorite too.

Makk said...

@ Titaxy

Nice o see you here. Keep visiting!

I hope you will find more nice works here in future too.

keep Smiling!

Makk said...

@ Megha

Awww rest of the lines aint upto the mark...?? lolzzzz


Anyway ,,,keep stopping by..!
:)

sm said...

well written

SatyU said...

Beautiful :)

SatyU said...

Its beautiful :)

Makk said...

# SM

thanks for visiting my blog dear.

Keep Stopping by.

Makk said...

@ Satyu

Beauty lies in eyes of beholder.

:-)

Keep visiting!

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