i was dying every single moment
pealing of my skin wasn't visible to her ..
i was embracing the deepest dark
tear scoops had fiercest drought
but....
for my surprize i was content
that she has become a new debutant
to explore her life for new spans
Njoying her life's every moment
though...
i was missing her , if running out of breath
puss was spilling ,skin beneath
heart was struggling for every moment of life
nerves were getting deeps & crests
stil...
i hadnt wished to let it be float
her smile was what made me afloat
her voice was what worked as my breath
I luv her ..as i am a vamp
who is in luv with blood & death
13 comments:
Aaaammmm.....really VAMPIRE LOVE good one.
different,new and quite intresting......
very nicely writen dear.....keep it up....:)
ahem..ahem..kya baat haii..Speechless..unique hai.kuch different hai..lots of thoughts..overall..mind blowing..:-)
simply gr888888888
hey im just shivering.........
@ angel
feel of canine as a mint
you will lv & may take a sprint
not away but in vamp
what do feel about being beneath...
@ megha
thank you....I hope i will see some of your works too ...
@ Pooja
thnk you :)
@chhaya
its your fabulous style of admiring.
thnk you
Vampire in love, sounds interesting.
Hi! thanks for following me.
@ Shas
Interesting .....keep in touch and you will fall in luv ..oOoOps ...i mean interest of this vampire...
thanks aren't acceptable here
well makk ur simply great......
Iam just spellbound....unique luv....indead...a diff form all 2gether.....
nupur
Heyy!! I just flowed some thing out of me, nothing great.Its all your greatness what making you see great in this work of mine.
Keep it up.
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