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55 Fiction#4: Celebration
They din't know what is it.
They couldn't be together, won't be together as well.
Few moments were all they could say their own.
She asked him,"what was it for you"
He replied," Celebration of life"
P. S.: Edited to add title.
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33 comments:
well said!
all the best!
Beautifully written and very well expressed! All the best for BAT! :)
No point commending on the length of the post :)
I am wondering if I got the essence correctly. Are these guys breaking up? Dying? A little confused. Please tell your perspective.
This blog conveys lots of emotions in one go..Covering a very major sphere.
Described true to it's title..
# Amity
:)... keep landing dear.
#Jaspreet
thanks for appriciation.
I hope to see you again.
#Kshitij
Well, its 55 fiction so but obvious.
and yeah... it was short lived fling...for ur understanding..
# unknown wanderer
:).... I hope to see some constructive criticism from you in future.
Please explain to what precisely you point to :)
# unknown wanderer
my comment is self explanatory.
Beautiful, beautiful! To bring out such a lovely aspect of "celebrations" and capturing it all in 5 simple lines ...wow! Hats off :)
#shruthi
Thank you. :)
sweet and simple :)
All the best :)
Here is my celebration:
Ms. Meduri- Celebrations
oops! got a bit confused :(
what was the occasion? were they going to die?
Loved it!! Hope you have more 55 Fiction on your blog, would like to visit them at leisure!
I m still to get a good insight into this form of writing!
Very well written with deep meaning lines.All the best for BAT
ATB :-)
A compressed expression of a vast phenomenon. Few words speaking a lot more than history, leaving the reader's imagination free to hunt for the fact. Well done. All the best.
# Ms Meduri, Viyoma
, Pratibha, Swayambhu, Cherry
Welcome here.
Hope you will like to be here in future as well.
Keep SMiling
# Mayur
Live it with your heart and you will know.
Every day is a occasion and every night you die.
Makk,
Brevity conveys more than words and your post just does tat.
well written
AMAZING !!
Just brilliant-cant believe that you have conveyed such a powerful feeling in so few words.
Just one complaint though-why could she not have said "what IS it to you"?
That would have been PERFECT !
#Muddassir
I hope you will keep stalking my page, provide ur valuable comments.
Keep Smiling.
#Brijender
:)...Life is not that Perfect I guess.
:)
short and sweet, succinct and well, written well.. all the luck for batom!
# Saro
I am counting on your words of appreciation.
Keep Smiling.
Keep landing here.
Cheers to his life.......:)
Beautifully explained.
Short and sweet :)
well written
#Clouds,SM
Glad you Njoyed.
#Shas
Keep SMiling.
waahhh bohut khoob :D
good luck
Hi Makk,
This one is sweet and now celebration are just round the corner, wish you Joy , health and happiness.
Take care.
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