हलक से आवाज़ निकली हि थी
और उन्होंने कहा. अभी आई
झुटपुटे से उजास निकली हि थी
कि एक बदली घिर आई
सीने से सांस निकली हि थी
कि और फिर न आई...
और उन्होंने कहा. अभी आई
झुटपुटे से उजास निकली हि थी
कि एक बदली घिर आई
सीने से सांस निकली हि थी
कि और फिर न आई...
9 comments:
Wow!! Beautiful expression!
Poignant!!
Confused me to great extent and then i re-re-re-re-re-read it and finally the meanings submerged in.
Serene yet not serene a composition..
You know verses written in Hindi leave me confused...I know Hindi is my matrabhasha but still man..it takes so long to understand actually read esp when you write in hindi :)
But it was a nice read...too deep as usual I would say!
Take Care
Bahut ummda likha hain aapne.
#Shilpa Garg
thanks for dropping by.
#unknown wanderer
well, you seems to be playing with your self.
#fatima
may be i need to work on my hindi too.
#shas
aapki dariyadili hai ji..:)
bahut khoob!! :)
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