Wednesday, 9 November 2011

Gray Strand

and he stared in her eyes beyond that glimmer
to see in heart, caress her in sob
to say she is THE one, for he could take all that
to see that blue poetry with,  that forgotten gray strand...





P.S.: It is a continuation/reply to this post

12 comments:

Insignia said...

Oh!! gray strand? Theres a beauty in that gray strand :) isnt it?

Makk said...

#insignia

its indeed beautiful. :)

He is actually enjoying that beauty in her eyes too.. as she is looking at her grays... :)

anilkurup59 said...

Is beauty in the eye, the heart beyond or the grey strand?

Makk said...

#anil

In all. In the universe and beyond, if any.

Neha said...

Meaningful at the core :)

suvaiba said...

thats more than just beautiful..!:)
thanks for the comment back there
but all i want to say is that
everyone grows but you only understand when you LEARN :)
tc

Cяystal said...

I totally agree with Insignia's comment.
This piece also has a hidden meaning I believe! Elaborate.?

Makk said...

#crystal

Well, if a hidden meaning is there then it mean its upto reader to read perceive it.

I have already given more words in reply to insignia.

Hope you liked it. :)

Makk said...

#suvaiba

I am glad you found i beautiful. May be your beauty made you do so.

:) hope to see you more often.

Makk said...

#Neha

meanings are to be drawn by observer. :)


share yours!

Keep smiling,,,

Megha said...

Every girl wishes for a love like him....

Anonymous said...

Is that really possible..to be able to say that i could take all for you?

Then what is that relation called?

Gray is inevitable part!

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