And she couldn't do this much...
to take care of her self
to keep smiling & to njoy her elf
fugitive, fragile, fiasco ridden
her body & soul has become
just one promise was asked to keep
to take care & to smile at deep.
to take care of her self
to keep smiling & to njoy her elf
her body & soul has become
just one promise was asked to keep
to take care & to smile at deep.
14 comments:
Hope she smiles :-)
yup..she smiles...but she had not kept her promise of taking care of herself.
:)
Makk,
I'm poetry challenged and usually do not comment on poetry. Not because I don't like to but because I feel I would do it and the author injustice. But at times some words haunt you, just one promise was asked to keep.. -- This did. So here I am, coming back, to leave a comment.
Loved it. It is more close to heart probably as it rhymes and sounds like a soulful rendition by Lee Ann Womack I love :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y2SfmcNg8js
Dear Madhu
I loved the music you have suggested.
It was gr8888888888888.
more over i am obliged to have your comment.
Keep it up.
Keep Smiling.
Ohh God. Hope the pic has nothing to do with the poetry.
Very nice :)
@ Megha
Well, not really.
Keep stopping by.
Keep Smiling!
Pretty emotive verse this, dear Makk! Didn't know you could be so humanly sensitive. Keep blogging and sharing. Cheers! :)
Shrinath Vashishtha
Port Blair.
Andaman & Nicobar Islands (India).
@ Mr. Vashishtha
Every one is pretty sensitive. Its only society of we humans which makes insensitivity in US.
Wow...it's a beautiful verse!!!
she sounds familiar, may be she did try to take care of herself..and somehow...,just a thought :)
@ Dagny
Hi!
welcome!
you wasn't supposed to just try, she was supposed to *Get It Done*.
You are always welcome with your thoughts dear.
i think she tried a lot...bt still she could not..its difficult to smile always
@ Mansi
Nothing is Impossible.
sometimes a few tears must fall
Among the laughter hidden...
Tears you are talking are different from what am I talking is different.
and don't mix-up things.
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