Tuesday, 12 January 2010

Mehak...

zindagi kuchh is qadar ajeeb huyi
nazar e inayat bhi na unki naseeb huyi

unhe uzr tha hamari shakshiyate e maujudagi se
andheron se humari dosti mazboot huyi

deewanagi hamari humien na chhod saki magar
maut se hamne kaha thaharo jara, mehak unki naseeb huyi...

12 comments:

Sunny said...

Good one yaar ... I like it ... even I write at times ... do pay a visit.

Insignia said...

"andheron se humari dosti mazboot huyi"...."mehak unki naseeb huyi...:.

Who are these two here? :-|

Complicated :-)

Makk said...

@ Insignia

may be that is Insignia of an Unknown Soul.

Keep Stopping by.

Keep Smiling!

raMmY said...

Hi :)

Its my first time here and i am gald i dropped by!

Excellent piece.. i specifically loved the last two lines
"deewanagi hamari humien na chhod saki magar
maut se hamne kaha thaharo jara, mehak unki naseeb huyi.."

good one :)

cheers
rammy

Makk said...

@ sunny

Surely, I will visit you some time.

Thanks for dropping by.

Makk said...

@ Rammy

Welcome to my page.

thanks for cheering.

Keep it up.

Keep Smiling!

Insignia said...

Ohhhh!!! :-| OK Makk....

Insignia of an Unknown Soul.....hmmmm.....

Makk said...

@ Insignia

you can share thoughts coming in your mind.

:)

Neeraj Shinde said...

Bahot Khub!!!!!!!!!!!

MADHU RAO | (INDImag.COM) said...

Wah ! Kya baat hai janaab ..

"andheron se humari dosti mazboot huyi"

Loved that line and what an ending "..thaharo jara, mehak unki naseeb huyi..."

Donno why it feels good when someone turns around and beats the grim reaper with a broom :-)

Makk said...

@ Neeraj

Shukriya Zanab!

Makk said...

@ Madhu Rao

Everyone has some thing buried in graveyard of memories. These verses some times touch those forgotten nerves. Though it doesn't mean that its some thing in which one can find his/her solace.

Pain has its own Njoyment but it has be in its own territory.

Keep njoying here!

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