Saturday 17 September 2011

I walk on...

I walk on and,
I don't look back

with the breeze,
some times chilled
at others not cool enough

with sunshine
Ouch! scorching at time
Gentle, otherwise

I walk on and,

I don't look back


with moon light
humble to the core
though mysterious in its own right

with night
making moments sensuous
but not always as I thought

I walk on and,
I don't look back

with day
passing by
without noticing happening so

with the time
healer of its own sort
peeler, too of a special kind

with every moment
I walk on and,
Ah! I look back, though I walk on...

11 comments:

Insignia said...

Well, have lots to comment but I keep quiet.

anilkurup59 said...

Your last verse sort of makes amends for "the not looking back'.
I did wonder if not reminiscing would alone help, perhaps wont that deprive us of not knowing what life has.

Though the ebb of time heals , I also felt that would not not feeling the day pass by, for instance, deprive us of the day itself. And then when we look back would 'nt it be void?

Honestly I'm not quite good at deciphering poetry.

Unknown Wanderer said...

So true to yourself..interestingly today i thought all day long about this same topic of walking and not looking back..i thought it is easy for some but for some is not and somehow i wish to not look back..this sudden urge to break away from everything i have ever called my own or wanted to make my own and never look back ever..

A very subtle write!

Makk said...

#insignia

For what joy???

Makk said...

#anil

well, I guess you on most of the things and poetry is one of them.

My verses are actually abstract pieces in heart & mind. So poetry... I am honored. :)

Looking back fills you with new emotions at times that may be or may be very desired.

but indeed to complete the circle of life there is no option for it.

It was nice to hear from you.

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

well, what if that thing you want to make yours, doesnt want same??

look back?

Kalyan said...

lovely poignant lines...nicely crafted words!

Cяystal said...

Healer and peeler? Ha.. me likes that. Immensely!
You craft words subtlety .. not an ordinary feat.

Makk said...

#Kalyan

Thanks for your words. Hope you keep landing here.

:)

Makk said...

#Crystal

Its nice to see you here. Gald you like lines.

Keep Stalking. Keep Smiling.

Unknown Wanderer said...

No matter what..then they will come back for me..right?

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