Thursday 29 September 2011

Agony

till death
damned to live
with agony of it
spreading smile
in other livings & deads

9 comments:

Insignia said...

I fail to decrypt.

anilkurup59 said...

"spreading smile in other dead"?
I;m trying to fetch that thought.

Makk said...

#Insignia

Humm...may be I have not written it the way I should have..

Makk said...

#Anil

dead here refers to following people:

1. Alive physically but dead the way they leading their lives.

2. Dead physically but believed to alive in some other frame of time & space.

3. Spirits

Cяystal said...

Haha! I can't imagine someone being SO awesome with such few words. I am awed.

Makk said...

#Crystal

May be its agony of being awed..:)

Unknown Wanderer said...

Like crushed petals giving away their fragrance.
Like seeping drops of color through crevices.
The bright lit up smiles on countenance,
damned or not damned but sprouted every time on their lips.


...through nones words...

Agony vanished and they lived happily ever after!

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

have you written its sequel?

:)

Unknown Wanderer said...

What do you feel?

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