and it happened that way
wanted or unwanted
being the real ME
the way I din't know will happen
some said, it was serendipity
other were sure about hallucination
not being sure about its crux
I kept staring at nowhere
desired or not so
but bound to be there
without being there
smiles, frustration, advice, complain
all came along, in its lore
still in chaos, I see it
as if I cannot see it
as I figure it, to be just a change
rocking & reeling all around
time has taken life to new place
its Constant and Unavoidable
well, I knew it will happen
with all & with me alike
am I not loosing myself as they say
or its just me & without any pretension of
13 comments:
Haven't seen a wiser use of striking off.
Mean it.
#Crystal
well, May be you can see few of archives on this blog then. :)
though I appreciate your view.
..but bound to be there
without being there..
Lovely!!!
No pretensions. That is a rarity. Well I think one has to read the verses a few times over to sink in. Good Makk.
#Neha
glad you liked..:)
#anil
May be I need to work on my writing skills more. hahahahaahhahaahah
:)
i agree with d last comment!....:D
Nice, I like the way you played with the strike through in verses :)
The world just sees him as he wants to be seen
the real him is so damn hidden
!
Well
its not hidden
its there in open
yet its invisble to the naked eye...
This is my first time here and I liked your writings...guess I'm gonna be come here again :)
Take Care
#Fatima
the Real him is damned.
hidden or not, up to you.
Welcome to this page.
Ceasing to flow more,
mask was bared.
Time stopped and smiled.
The joy of new discovery,
spirited the soul alive.
Merged and mingled,
realistic illusion survived..
Perfect pleasure for the understandings!
#Raji
I hope yo visit more often then. :)
#unknown wanderer
Perfect for your understanding may be. Its quiet subjective you see. :)
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