days, night, weeks..... years
all passing by even without "bye dear"
it seems I am growing in something different
different then I thought of
different then what I wanted
not that I can control it
because its just an outcome
of things ....
those happened during all this while
chipping my beauty and smile
now its just a hag, I am
who react rather retaliate
even if somebody ask "how are you mate"
and I cry there after for those moment
because I know that I dint want me to be that
and then it chips me off
a li'l more, just enough not to be visible...
and it chips me off...
and it chips me off...
and it chips me off...
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I noticed the usage, "Hag", that makes me wonder -the lines are on who?
word implies the total negligence of the protagonist about his situation after years of not manicuring the appearance and health that no one recognize him. just a comparison.
and of - course lack of vocab on my side.
I could not find similar word for a man.
In self pity or self destruction?
Pity... hummm not for me I think.
Destruction... I am not sure about.
In any way, its not "SELF"
At times circumstances make us what we are, even though we may have wanted things differently...
Its always good to introspect.
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