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I was waiting for her
every second in every hour
in tick tock of watch
in splash of water spilled by
in every passing by passenger
I was waiting for her
every second in every hour
in every page of magazine
in every changed sitting position
in hullabaloos of chandeliers
I was waiting for her
every second in every hour
in chill of ice and warmth of fire
days, months & its been years
in my every smile & tear
Still I am waiting for her
every second in every hour..
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33 comments:
Very Nice...I thought it would have a happy ending but alas!
The feeling of hope and grief is put up very nicely.
All the best for the Blog-a-Ton!
I do believe that the hardest part of one's existence is in "waiting"!
And you expressed it so well here!
Good luck... :) the third good poem i read so far from the entries this time!
Good morning! :)
Hey, where's my comment here, I am sure I already commented :)
Awesome wait..!!
Reminds me of a line said by you :)
Keep smiling always!!
# Megha
See you were also hoping something...but happy endings are not my taste of writing I guess.
Keep Landing here. In hope of finding some thing with happy ending ...because you never know... :)
Keep Smiling!
I do believe that the hardest part of one's existence is in "waiting"
what made yo believe so??
I had not approved any comment. and so yours also was in moderation.
Its nice to see a poetess on my page.
Keep landing here.
Keep Smiling.
#unknown wanderer
How can wait be awesome?
what's that line?
Wait gives me an awesome feeling so felt the waiting here also awesome :) ..
Hmm..The line i will let you know sometime .. :)
Alas!!! Keep waiting :-)
Really nice lines. I just fail to understand one line. Someone is waiting for some; by your lines I think its in a public place like a railway station or bus stand? Because you mention passengers.
But chandeliers???? In a railway station or a bus stand?
I could not agree less that waiting is the hardest part.
But beautiful words
'Still I am waiting for her
every second in every hour..'
Loved reading it
For whom have you been waiting? :P
Keep waiting she isn't that far just caught in the traffic of life :)
# unknown wandere
thats wht I asked, how can wait be awesomw??
:)
Chandeliers..I have seen in Railway Station. you want to know the name??
:)
and things in my writing have their own different meaning as well. I guess you knew this??No?
#Md. Muddassir
You are welcome Sir.
:)
@ shas
may be doesn't even know that..
:)
Anyway... Keep smiling.
its nice to see you here.
Those who do not understand our silence may never understand our words.
The post is moving but i hope the protagonist gets a grip before the wait turns into an interminable one.
The interminable wait! The thrills and chills of love! Sigh..
Waiting for the Night which has full moon in sight..
Waiting for Someone to call me A**..
Waiting for a majestic ambiance to fill through..
Waiting for a drop of water to pass through the thirsty throat..
Waiting for a sack of rice to fill up to the brim..
Waiting for the climax of pleasure..
Waiting for the clock to strike desired time..
Waiting for the date to come and shine..
Waiting for the mail which brings a throbbing heart inside..
Waiting for that phone call which was known..
Waiting to hear a full bloom laugh again..
Waiting to know the feelings caught in air above..
Waiting for that message which will Say good night..
Waiting for that message which will say good morning..
Waiting for that hug which will ignite the soul..
Waiting for the kiss which will Make two souls go ONE..
Waiting for the craving which will finally give peace..
Waiting for Someone to return from a tour..
Waiting for someone to realize what is needed..
Waiting for someone to Read me through..
Waiting for someone to say me to repeat the thing i said..
Waiting for a deadly Bite..
:)
These are *SOME* of 'em..For which I wait :)..Aren't these wait awesome?
This is a awesome story.. I loved the ending even though it was not a happy one..
Wishing you a good luck for BAT..
--Someone Is Special--
That's straight and simple to understand. Nice poem.
Thankfully, a short post... people have written such huge ones this time.
# Brijendra
Nice thoughts. I will convey your regards.
:)
@ sidra
thrills and chills giving sighs??
Cool .. :)
@ Unknown Wanderer
Well, you have experienced them...
and few are applicable to be too ...and yeahh..I agree with you somewhat. :)
#Some one is Special
Thanks to you dear. :)
#kshitij
you are thanking me for a nice post or for a short post??
lollzzzzz
Short and sweet feeling with a hope that the wait comes to an end. Quite impressive words. All the best.
# cherry blossom
Welcome to this place..
Hope to see you again.
Keep Smiling.
waiting for you...well written.The poem has been crafted well.
Chk my blog too :)
Wow! Seems so real that I ws praying for her to return! Wonderfully written!
#uma
Welcome to my page!
Thanx for your encouraging words.
I hope to see you here again.
@Swaram
Welcome!
Its a pleasant surprise to see your comment.
Glad you like the craft.
Keep Landing..
hope dat she also does not have to wait much longer......:)
gud luck for finding her.....
Hi,
Life is very amazing , don't waste time in waiting Just call.
Have Ginger Tea in the chilli weather out here...
and the presence of the spcial one will automatically be felt.
have a great weekend.
Enjoy
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