I walk on and,
I don't look back
with the breeze,
some times chilled
at others not cool enough
with sunshine
Ouch! scorching at time
Gentle, otherwise
I walk on and,
I don't look back
with moon light
humble to the core
though mysterious in its own right
with night
making moments sensuous
but not always as I thought
I walk on and,
I don't look back
with day
passing by
without noticing happening so
with the time
healer of its own sort
peeler, too of a special kind
with every moment
I walk on and,
Ah! I look back, though I walk on...
I don't look back
with the breeze,
some times chilled
at others not cool enough
with sunshine
Ouch! scorching at time
Gentle, otherwise
I walk on and,
I don't look back
with moon light
humble to the core
though mysterious in its own right
with night
making moments sensuous
but not always as I thought
I walk on and,
I don't look back
with day
passing by
without noticing happening so
with the time
healer of its own sort
peeler, too of a special kind
with every moment
I walk on and,
Ah! I look back, though I walk on...
11 comments:
Well, have lots to comment but I keep quiet.
Your last verse sort of makes amends for "the not looking back'.
I did wonder if not reminiscing would alone help, perhaps wont that deprive us of not knowing what life has.
Though the ebb of time heals , I also felt that would not not feeling the day pass by, for instance, deprive us of the day itself. And then when we look back would 'nt it be void?
Honestly I'm not quite good at deciphering poetry.
So true to yourself..interestingly today i thought all day long about this same topic of walking and not looking back..i thought it is easy for some but for some is not and somehow i wish to not look back..this sudden urge to break away from everything i have ever called my own or wanted to make my own and never look back ever..
A very subtle write!
#insignia
For what joy???
#anil
well, I guess you on most of the things and poetry is one of them.
My verses are actually abstract pieces in heart & mind. So poetry... I am honored. :)
Looking back fills you with new emotions at times that may be or may be very desired.
but indeed to complete the circle of life there is no option for it.
It was nice to hear from you.
#unknown wanderer
well, what if that thing you want to make yours, doesnt want same??
look back?
lovely poignant lines...nicely crafted words!
Healer and peeler? Ha.. me likes that. Immensely!
You craft words subtlety .. not an ordinary feat.
#Kalyan
Thanks for your words. Hope you keep landing here.
:)
#Crystal
Its nice to see you here. Gald you like lines.
Keep Stalking. Keep Smiling.
No matter what..then they will come back for me..right?
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