Sunday, 4 September 2011

It just blows off...

when i try to cover it
it just blows off..for you
to see it

pain hurled in red threads of eyes
and tears to share the load
heavy heart & countless bloats

slow downed walk
eyes with out spark
vodka, wine whiskys & rum
all ready to scumb spirits

whether play it with charm
modulated voice
with tint of smile
blends of rejoice

when I try to cover it
it just blows off ...for you
to see it



13 comments:

Insignia said...

The more you try to cover, the more its gonna show up.. Just the way you hold back the sand in your palms. Let it free

anilkurup59 said...

Yes things blow in the wind.
Good way of expressing. I like it

Unknown Wanderer said...

Blowing off quite at ease.
Serene penning!

~*******~

Makk said...

#insignia

still you never give up on covering. Do you??

Makk said...

#Anil

thank you.

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

keep smiling always.

sm said...

nice poem

Ifra said...

Hey thanks for stopping by and commenting ;]
Your blog is cool, too. Following :]

Makk said...

#SM

thanks for dropping by.

Makk said...

@iffi

thats nice of you. :)

Sh@s said...

Chupa lo jitna chupa sakte ho, par un ankhon se kaise chupaoge jo tumhare mann ka har bhed janti hai.

Nice one. Wish you could write it in Hindi, too.

äмän ♥ said...

Let it free. nice post =)
following you :)
http://my-littlee-secrets.blogspot.com/

Makk said...

#aman

thanks for stopping..

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