Flowing Against Time ...: 55 Fiction#1:alive..

Monday 22 February 2010

55 Fiction#1:alive..

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers

to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of

fifty-five words.

It is my first attempt for 55 fiction. I hope from all the reader to bear with & provide their valuable suggestion

they chuckled together.
enduring emotions made it impossible for him to refrain from ensuring more time with her.
He asked her,'" why don't you get enrolled in my college"
she replied,"I would have indeed, if I have been Alive" still smiling.
It is hard to say what was he? dumb stuck or horrified?

23 comments:

ToBlog today said...: I would not change a word on your 55 fiction, reading it gave me shivers...; Monday 22 February 2010 at 16:18:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #Angelina

Ohhh... have i done it...really?

You see,,,its my very first attempt...and more over stories are nt my forte.

thank you for your appreciation.

:); Monday 22 February 2010 at 16:39:00 GMT+5:30
Insignia said...: Oops!!! A ghost wanting to get enrolled in a college!! Hmmmmmm........; Monday 22 February 2010 at 19:00:00 GMT+5:30
Meow said...: good attempt :)

Love your template :); Monday 22 February 2010 at 21:38:00 GMT+5:30
Titaxy said...: oooo scary ..

good one...loved it!; Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 03:21:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: # Insignia

rather its a guy wanting his ghost friend to get enrolled.

Keep landing here.; Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 09:47:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #Meow

thanks meow for both. :); Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 09:47:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #titaxy

meant to scare you ofcourse but you got scared or not??
lollzzz

:); Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 09:48:00 GMT+5:30
Shilpa Garg said...: Scary!! :O; Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 15:54:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #shilpa

awwwwww..really?

thank you...don't be scared its just fiction.

:); Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 16:08:00 GMT+5:30
Nethra said...: Hehehe! I wish I was there to see the reaction on his face.
Nice one. :); Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 23:09:00 GMT+5:30
Nethra said...: I wanted to be with the guy to see the reaction on his face when she told that.
Hehehe!
It was hilarious. :); Tuesday 23 February 2010 at 23:34:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #Netra

lollzzzz..I guess then your face expression also could have watchable.

Keep stopping by.; Wednesday 24 February 2010 at 10:16:00 GMT+5:30
SatyU said...: Lolss

hehehe.. Its nice.

Its beautiful :)
Im still laughing rather smiling ;) :); Thursday 25 February 2010 at 18:05:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: # satyu

dont tell me, you are able to relate with that gal??

are you?; Thursday 25 February 2010 at 18:10:00 GMT+5:30
Megha said...: dumbstruk ? I would have fainted. Nice.; Friday 26 February 2010 at 20:32:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #Megha

oh that would have been so nice of you again...:)

faiting beauty luks nice(as far as its not serious illness or some thing like that)...:)

Keep visiting.; Saturday 27 February 2010 at 22:16:00 GMT+5:30
Sh@s said...: he...he..bhoot...bhoot.. :p :p

Good one Makk.

Is that guy u??...lolzzz; Wednesday 3 March 2010 at 02:23:00 GMT+5:30
Anonymous said...: so many rules for commenting? :P
That was a scary one!! Just loved the twist :); Wednesday 3 March 2010 at 04:21:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: # Shas

naaaaaaaaaah....:)

I wish i could have been there.lollzzz

Keep Visiting.; Wednesday 3 March 2010 at 09:33:00 GMT+5:30
Makk said...: #evanscentthoughts

Blog World need that now.

Thanks for visiting. Keep it up.

Keep Smiling.; Wednesday 3 March 2010 at 09:36:00 GMT+5:30
Unknown said...: Its a gr8888 begining makk....love 2 read more from u....its time u make stories one of ur forte....cheers!!!!!; Monday 8 March 2010 at 20:40:00 GMT+5:30
Rajendra Raikwar said...: Good one..; Tuesday 27 December 2011 at 13:54:00 GMT+5:30

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