drops of coolant, fallen on burning dzire
to see, just a mere glance of her magical eyes
and they evaporated in fumes,
declaring need of a mayhem or snow fall?
caressing with care & looking those pair
of beauty &depth, as love was in the air
taste &touch, drenched every moment
days became hours and hours, seconds...
smile, that made all fallen in straight
was decorating her eyes, lips &face
neither wanted to part again
all they were doing was to refrain
from even thought, of going apart
but unknowing of every thing coming a dart
that morning sun wasn't as bright
air wasn't as crispy &light
still they enjoyed the feeling or them
or being one, being integral, in the quenching flames
21 comments:
Its beautiful :)
# Satyu
thank you.
Keep smiling!
wow!! romantic!!
lovely!
# insignia
how romantic?? lemme know...;)
after long time you are here i guess.
:)
Keep stopping by.
Keep smiling.....
#titaxy
is love in the air??
:)
keep smiling?
Nice-nice.....The quest to fulfil desires...
Keep smiling always.....
#unknown wanderer
nICE-nICE....really?
take care
Keep smiling!
Makk,
I am here in your blog each time you have a post. So if its been sometime me visiting your blog, it also means you have not had a post for some time :-P
And yeah how romantic?? Its romantically romantic :-P
Wonderful...so so romantic
Very Romantic :)
I really loved it. Your choose words very smartly.
Lovely poem. :)
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#insignia
thank you MADAME. :)
Let romance fill your life as well.
Keep visiting...Keep smiling
#Nalini
:)
Keep Njoying!
#Megha
How do you see 'this' romance in your words??
#Nethra
Ohhh...you are being nice with me here...:)
Keep it up.
Keep smiling.
Makk, this is my first visit to your blog.. And I'm real glad that I came across it.. Beautiful poem.. Was just lost in those words... AWESOME!
Hmm........quenching flames with an unquenchable desire...
Wish ya belated Happy Holi :) :)
# Sweetness
Welcome here.
I am glad to know that you njoyed.
Keep spreading sweetness over here.
#shas
I guess, you can feel that. Can you?
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