Thursday 25 February 2010

quenching flames....


drops of coolant, fallen on burning dzire
to see, just a mere glance of her magical eyes

and they evaporated in fumes, 
declaring need of a mayhem or snow fall?

caressing with care & looking those pair
of  beauty &depth, as love was in the air

taste &touch, drenched every moment
days became hours and hours, seconds...

smile, that made all fallen in straight
was decorating her eyes, lips &face

neither wanted to part again
all they were doing was to refrain

from even thought, of going apart
but unknowing of every thing coming a dart

that morning sun wasn't as bright
air wasn't as crispy &light

still they enjoyed the feeling or them
or being one, being integral, in the quenching flames




21 comments:

SatyU said...

Its beautiful :)

Makk said...

# Satyu

thank you.

Keep smiling!

Insignia said...

wow!! romantic!!

Titaxy said...

lovely!

Makk said...

# insignia

how romantic?? lemme know...;)




after long time you are here i guess.

:)

Keep stopping by.

Keep smiling.....

Makk said...

#titaxy

is love in the air??

:)

keep smiling?

Unknown Wanderer said...

Nice-nice.....The quest to fulfil desires...

Keep smiling always.....

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

nICE-nICE....really?

take care

Keep smiling!

Insignia said...

Makk,

I am here in your blog each time you have a post. So if its been sometime me visiting your blog, it also means you have not had a post for some time :-P

And yeah how romantic?? Its romantically romantic :-P

Nalini Hebbar said...

Wonderful...so so romantic

Megha said...

Very Romantic :)

Nethra said...

I really loved it. Your choose words very smartly.
Lovely poem. :)

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Makk said...

#insignia

thank you MADAME. :)

Let romance fill your life as well.


Keep visiting...Keep smiling

Makk said...

#Nalini

:)

Keep Njoying!

Makk said...

#Megha

How do you see 'this' romance in your words??

Makk said...

#Nethra

Ohhh...you are being nice with me here...:)

Keep it up.

Keep smiling.

Sweetness said...

Makk, this is my first visit to your blog.. And I'm real glad that I came across it.. Beautiful poem.. Was just lost in those words... AWESOME!

Sh@s said...

Hmm........quenching flames with an unquenchable desire...

Wish ya belated Happy Holi :) :)

Makk said...

# Sweetness

Welcome here.

I am glad to know that you njoyed.

Keep spreading sweetness over here.

Makk said...

#shas

I guess, you can feel that. Can you?

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