kuchh tha shayad,
mukammal nahi
bas tha kuchh
ankaha, unchhua,
deh jarjar ho chali thi usaki,
roondi ja chuki thi
anginat bar, anjaano se
jo janate the
woh janane layak na the
khilkhilahat
usaki chahu aur vyapt hai
naino mien chamak
deh vishakt hai
usaki thokar mien hai
zindagi
phir bhi na jane kyun
udaas hai
par
koi chhoo na paya
usaki rooh ko
paak..
nirmal...
pyaasi ...
aadhoori......
kab hogi usaki peeda, damit
kab hogi woh
poori
13 comments:
Oh!! Makk, These lines just suits for that lady in that picture. Wow!! Your words have made the picture even more beautiful. Wow!! Keep up!
have you seen the pic in same light, prior to my blog??
I had not seen the picture the way you did. Really nice... Complicated life, complicated emotions... Beautiful poem.
Oh yes!! That was how I visualized. If you recall my caption to this picture, I had asked "Can you see a woman walking towards you?"
:-) Very nicely written Makk.
#Gautam
Thank you!
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#insignia
I know your caption..but that lady in your caption is same as mine that I did not know.
Thanks again for sharing those pics.
Keep smiling.
I am at awe the beauty of each word... powerful and deep... very beautifully written...
# Rajlakshmi
Welcome to the world.
Nice to hear you enjoyed.
I hope to hear from you more often then not.
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Nice composition nice summation trampled emotions.
@ tarun
thanks for your encouraging words. Keep stopping by.
Liked the words 'kuch unkaha,unchua'.
There are a lot of words that passes through our lips that goes unspoken, untouched.
#shas
your presence is encouraging.
Keep it alive here.
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