Monday 15 February 2010

Ankahi...

 

kuchh tha shayad,
mukammal nahi
bas tha kuchh
ankaha, unchhua,
deh jarjar ho chali thi usaki,
roondi ja chuki thi
anginat bar, anjaano se
jo janate the
woh janane layak na the

khilkhilahat
usaki chahu aur vyapt hai
naino mien chamak
deh vishakt hai
usaki thokar mien hai
zindagi
phir bhi na jane kyun
udaas hai


par
koi chhoo na paya
usaki rooh ko
paak..
nirmal...
pyaasi ...
aadhoori......
kab  hogi usaki peeda, damit
kab hogi woh
poori




Picture Courtesy: Gautam & Insignia


13 comments:

Insignia said...

Oh!! Makk, These lines just suits for that lady in that picture. Wow!! Your words have made the picture even more beautiful. Wow!! Keep up!

Makk said...

have you seen the pic in same light, prior to my blog??

Anonymous said...

I had not seen the picture the way you did. Really nice... Complicated life, complicated emotions... Beautiful poem.

Insignia said...

Oh yes!! That was how I visualized. If you recall my caption to this picture, I had asked "Can you see a woman walking towards you?"

:-) Very nicely written Makk.

Makk said...

#Gautam

Thank you!

Keep Stopping by.

Keep Smiling!

Makk said...

#insignia

I know your caption..but that lady in your caption is same as mine that I did not know.

Thanks again for sharing those pics.


Keep smiling.

Rajlakshmi said...

I am at awe the beauty of each word... powerful and deep... very beautifully written...

Makk said...

# Rajlakshmi

Welcome to the world.

Nice to hear you enjoyed.

I hope to hear from you more often then not.


Keep Smiling!

Tarun Mitra said...

Nice composition nice summation trampled emotions.

Makk said...
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Makk said...

@ tarun

thanks for your encouraging words. Keep stopping by.

Sh@s said...

Liked the words 'kuch unkaha,unchua'.
There are a lot of words that passes through our lips that goes unspoken, untouched.

Makk said...

#shas

your presence is encouraging.

Keep it alive here.

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