Monday 15 March 2010

Akshunnn...


सरकता रहा वो कभी पानी 
कभी  रेत की  तरह  ...
दरख्ख्त भी ना रह सके अपनी जड़ों पे 
खंडहर हो चली थी इमारतें ...

इंसान भी चूर हुए , उनके अहम् भी 
टूटे कसमें, वादे और टूटे वहम भी 
ना रही सभ्यताएं , अवशेस अवश्य बचे 
ना रहा कुछ  पूर्ण, ना रहा  कुछ अक्ष्क्षुन्न...
English Script:
sarkata raha woh kabhi pani
kabhi rait ki tarah ...
darkkhat bhi na rah sake apni jadon pe
khandahar ho chali thi imaratein...

insaan bhi choor huye, unke aham bhi
tute kasamein, vadein aur tute waham bhi
na rahi sabhyatayein, avshesh avshya bache
na raha kuchh poorn,na raha kuchh akshkshunn....




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16 comments:

Unknown Wanderer said...

Awesome write-up..
Wel it is an understatement....its beyond that...

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

you are being nice with me. Now.

:)

Keep smiling.

Blogger said...

dast wonderful piece from you again !!! but why dont you translate in hindi ? its sometimes difficult to read hindi words written in english

PS : jus a suggestion !

Makk said...

#blogger

I agree with you on that. I take suggestion in positive spirit.

So feel free to speak.

Thank you. :)

Keep smiling.

Insignia said...

This is wonderful...The first para- comparing with water and then sand...beautiful.. Keep writing :-)

Makk said...

#insignia

keep being nice with me.

:)


Keep smiling.

Sh@s said...

You are at your best when u write in hindi though ur pennings in English is equally good.

Makk said...

#Shas

:)....I am obliged.

Er. said...

Waah! :)

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Bas kashti bhar ka gaanv hai,
Khuskismat ham kaabil nahin!

Jo tooti footi naav hai,
Aur meelo tak saahil nahin!

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Insignia said...

Ok!! Makk, next time I m NOT going to be nice to you. Just wait and watch!!

Makk said...

#the virgin author

your lines are for whole blog or some things elective?

Thanks for visit and words.

Keep it up.

Makk said...

#Dee

I am all smiling....Surely I will do so.

Keep smiling.

Makk said...

#Insignia

*Grinning....*

:)... I welcome..:)

Rajlakshmi said...

the last lines are amazing :D beautiful is a word too small to describe it :)

Makk said...

#Rajlaxmi

Heyy I am glad you liked.


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