Thursday 11 March 2010

unsaid....

tip...   tip....
not water, not tears, its red, its thick,
its blood........

dripping from wounds,unseen
continuous, being unclouted, unheard

nothing happen to it, its unhurt
every thing was quite, unsaid

it waited to get healed, untouched
smile on lips, in which every one take dips

breath is deep, heavy but undisturbed
will she be able to see, unwritten, unsaid..


14 comments:

Anonymous said...

Makk you are very good at poetry :) Liked this :) I think I can never write one like this!

Makk said...

#evanescentthoughts

Its to hear from you and specially these words.

on the other note, You are special in a different way, I cant write your stuff either.

We all are unique in one or other we just need to identify ourselves.

Happy writing.

Keep landing here.

Keep smiling.

Blogger said...

Wonderful!!!I wionder how come you write it so beautifully ??

Makk said...

#blogger

Well, its nothing big. I am writing since quite a time.

You can enjoy archives, if you like to.

Keep visiting.

Keep Smiling.

Unknown Wanderer said...

It really has unsaid words in each line.....makes me think till the core..till a image gets reflected....in my mind

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

what is the Image??

Unknown Wanderer said...

it's to be seen through the mind i cannot describe it so exactly...

Makk said...

#unknown wanderer

humm...well..

hopefully I will see the image some time or other.

Keep smiling

Take Care.

Insignia said...

:-) Mystery. Your lines are a real mystery. Liked it

Makk said...

#insignia

:) ...try to solve it.

:)

Unknown said...

nicely said the unsaid......commendable...:-)

Rajlakshmi said...

very deep and dark :)
well written...

Makk said...

#Nupur

humm....:)

Keep stopping by.

Makk said...

#Rajlakshmi

thank you for you words.

Keep visiting.

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