tip... tip....
not water, not tears, its red, its thick,
its blood........
dripping from wounds,unseen
continuous, being unclouted, unheard
nothing happen to it, its unhurt
every thing was quite, unsaid
it waited to get healed, untouched
smile on lips, in which every one take dips
breath is deep, heavy but undisturbed
will she be able to see, unwritten, unsaid..
14 comments:
Makk you are very good at poetry :) Liked this :) I think I can never write one like this!
#evanescentthoughts
Its to hear from you and specially these words.
on the other note, You are special in a different way, I cant write your stuff either.
We all are unique in one or other we just need to identify ourselves.
Happy writing.
Keep landing here.
Keep smiling.
Wonderful!!!I wionder how come you write it so beautifully ??
#blogger
Well, its nothing big. I am writing since quite a time.
You can enjoy archives, if you like to.
Keep visiting.
Keep Smiling.
It really has unsaid words in each line.....makes me think till the core..till a image gets reflected....in my mind
#unknown wanderer
what is the Image??
it's to be seen through the mind i cannot describe it so exactly...
#unknown wanderer
humm...well..
hopefully I will see the image some time or other.
Keep smiling
Take Care.
:-) Mystery. Your lines are a real mystery. Liked it
#insignia
:) ...try to solve it.
:)
nicely said the unsaid......commendable...:-)
very deep and dark :)
well written...
#Nupur
humm....:)
Keep stopping by.
#Rajlakshmi
thank you for you words.
Keep visiting.
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