Friday 9 April 2010

Dilapidation....

Running though her eyes, they appeared
yearning to fall and get smeared

to find some
hugging arms
or soothing heavy, husky voice to calm

earlier it was all dreamland
he was all, mentor, guide & friend

she used to run to & fro, to be a catch of him
to be a toy, in his playing palms

brutal dilapidation of the world,
she witnessed with heavy heart

but before that she got confused 
flying fist& flaring eyes; for her, all dart

why did voices reached high pitch
and harshness became the breakfast& lunch

Ohh! its raining, through eyes
Dad!! why couldn't you made it 

I missed you, very much 
and will be missing You but with pain...









16 comments:

Unknown Wanderer said...

So nice..full of emotions...

A different kind of blog but roaming in the same spheres with those emotions of being in a clandestine mode...

Makk said...

:)

Keep Stalking...:)

Insignia said...

Harsh world.

Very strong words Makk...dilapidation...dart....fists...flaring...but these are the apt words

:-) Take care

Titaxy said...

sad but nicely written...powerful words :)

Anonymous said...

'flying fist& flaring eyes; for her, all dart

why did voices reached high pitch
and harshness became the breakfast& lunch'


Sad... :(

I don't think a lot of us even notice that children can also feel...

Chandrika Shubham said...

How sweet! :)

Makk said...

#Insignia

Thank you.

You are also responsible for this post. By the way.

:)

Keep Smiling.

Makk said...

#titaxy

hummm.....thanks..

but would not it be better if situation could improve?

Makk said...

#IHM

A human being is most sensitive in early age of childhood...

and what they get then ....Pathetic.

Even situations no better so called well educated urban societies.

village are better in many ways.

Keep visiting IHM.

Makk said...

#Chandrika

Did you read whole post??

I would like to hear from you....more about the post.

Insignia said...

Makk,

Yeah I realized that I was responsible as soon as I read it :-)

Thanks so much

Makk said...

#Insignia

Most welcome.

HaRy!! said...

i hate the missing part :( truly touching!

Anonymous said...

mental dilapidation that is being caused by changes of the world.

Makk said...

Hary o Hary

Cmon smile up..you luk better that way

thanks for comment.

Makk said...

#blommer22

Welcome here!

I hope you liked post.

Keep dropping by.

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